Friday, January 22, 2016

ASSIGNMENT #3 DUE 1/22


1. Choose 2 TEAR  paragrahs on the blog from a different class that has not received feedback on their assignment.

2. Take a look at the Blog Entry Rubric and decide what score you think the student should receive.

3. You will comment on the TEAR with the following:


A. Your initials and your period number.

B. The score they should receive.

C. One strength & area of improvement that should be addressed.


4. You will then post a comment to this assignment with your first initial, last name, and your period number.  You will post the links to the comments you made.  The first comment to this post is an example of what your post should look like.

71 comments:

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  2. L. R.
    3rd Period

    http://christiancomeaux.blogspot.com/2016/01/works-of-fiction-authors-usually-use.html?showComment=1453473950054#c7212504693087673907


    http://alexsblogtheroad.blogspot.com/2016/01/cormac-mccarthys-highly-acclaimed-book.html?showComment=1453474149211#c3027025428601127719

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  3. C. Wyatt
    2nd Period
    http://estephaniarodriguez.blogspot.com/
    http://mytearessay.blogspot.com/

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  4. J. Colquitt 1st period
    http://abigaelfalekulo.blogspot.com/2016/01/handmaids-tale-by-margaret-at-wood-in.html?showComment=1453474102178#c6627675901048599131

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    1. http://marinayellowsubmarine.blogspot.com/2016/01/tear-frankenstein.html?showComment=1453474622770#c3929529938852104958

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  5. http://mytearessay.blogspot.com/2016/01/essay-on-character.html?showComment=1453473751034#c1723634097807354723

    http://reviewyoureads.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-tear-essay-road-written.html?showComment=1453474363329#c3360793293098037144

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  6. K Cohen
    2nd Period

    http://cassysprophecy.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-handmaids-tale.html

    http://darnthatsdeep.blogspot.com/2016/01/being-stuck-in-place-deprived-of-any_15.html?showComment=1453474183856#c5379580976040682613

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  7. N. Idlebird
    Period 2

    http://dantheman1217.blogspot.com/2016/01/mccarthys-novel-road-shows-aftermath-of.html?showComment=1453474801474#c3811341482127146747

    http://kimsmoreno.blogspot.com/2016/01/mccarthys-novel-road-was-inspirational.html?showComment=1453474106306#c4750537295360973791

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  9. A. Chukwuemeka
    Period 2

    http://deartran.blogspot.com/2016/01/a-characters-demise-road-written-by.html?showComment=1453474971825#c2124066625986489831

    http://joshuachiwuziefrankenstein.blogspot.com/2016/01/victor-frankenstein.html?showComment=1453474334478#c8692883998649298720

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  10. D. Omonubi
    2nd Period

    http://alsandriaj.blogspot.com/2016/01/tear-handmaids-tale.html#comment-form

    http://blessingye.blogspot.com/2016/01/not-uncommon-for-marriages-to-fall.html?showComment=1453474857792#c1466992669026545885

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  11. R. Cook
    2nd Period

    http://christiancomeaux.blogspot.com/2016/01/works-of-fiction-authors-usually-use.html?showComment=1453474978960#c4433930180298132144

    http://taiyaburks123.blogspot.com/2015/12/frankstein-assignment-2.html

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  12. Abdul Campos

    2nd Period

    http://lauraalozzano.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-by-cormac-mc-carthy.html?showComment=1453474938365#c5326427362786898279

    http://danielmtz98.blogspot.com/2016/01/being-contained-in-place-that-you_15.html?showComment=1453475206749#c1385756863638903213

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  13. D. Huynh
    2nd Period

    http://lauraalozzano.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-by-cormac-mc-carthy.html?showComment=1453475214059#c1872538700625225644

    http://kimsmoreno.blogspot.com/2016/01/mccarthys-novel-road-was-inspirational.html?showComment=1453474860475#c505042614347383786

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  14. D. Gomez
    period 2


    http://the1andonlyace.blogspot.com/2016/01/create-art-through-their-own-form-of.html#comment-form


    http://darnthatsdeep.blogspot.com/2016/01/being-stuck-in-place-deprived-of-any_15.html?showComment=1453474724230#c8203520126235967760

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  15. B. Bui
    3rd Period

    http://lukepogi.blogspot.com/2016/01/assignment-2-narrator.html?showComment=1453476458210#c1405670773238212240

    http://heyimnia.blogspot.com/2016/01/victor-frankenstein.html?showComment=1453476690136#c284920416640925864

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  20. C. Comeaux
    3rd Period

    http://eadorsey4sfrankenstein.blogspot.com/

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    1. http://anaisbriseno.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-road-is-post-apocalyptic-novel.html

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  24. D.Manuel
    3rd Period

    http://tayrayy.blogspot.com/2016/01/in-handmaids-tale-there-is-character.html?showComment=1453477159730#c6038381371066545462

    http://chynnaschaoticblog.blogspot.com/2016/01/cormac-mccarthey-is-known-author-for.html#comment-form

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  25. A. Medrano
    3rd Period

    http://cristelsecretplace.blogspot.com/2016/01/topic-one-discussion.html?showComment=1453477424600#c8364670827013582492


    http://flowenolcinur.blogspot.com/2016/01/cormac-mccarthys-post-apocalypse-novel.html?showComment=1453476909779#c6411565321097405553

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  26. A. Falekulo
    3rd Period
    http://tayrayy.blogspot.com/2016/01/in-handmaids-tale-there-is-character.html?showComment=1453477016714#c6400622114330967909

    http://kaylavuong.blogspot.com/2016/01/scientifical-novel-frankenstein-author.html?showComment=1453477586197#c404852255292121446

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  27. C. Serrano
    3rd period

    http://dantheman1217.blogspot.com/2016/01/mccarthys-novel-road-shows-aftermath-of.html?showComment=1453477507096#c1760898650992060974

    http://marisolvillalbap2theroad.blogspot.com/2016/01/tear-essay.html?showComment=1453477860662#c4124755482810315813

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  29. M Roque
    3rd period

    http://natheroad.blogspot.com/2016/01/mccarthys-fictional-novel-road-is.html?showComment=1453477126466#c8045315966003128009

    http://heyimnia.blogspot.com/2016/01/victor-frankenstein.html?showComment=1453477885266#c7985010787763932538

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  30. D. Bitaseme
    3rd Period

    http://anaisbriseno.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-road-is-post-apocalyptic-novel.html?showComment=1453478221516#c607725767506339741

    http://alsandriaj.blogspot.com/2016/01/tear-handmaids-tale.html#comment-form

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  31. http://dvohandmaidstale.blogspot.com

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  32. http://dvohandmaidstale.blogspot.com

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  33. Tomi OSude
    Period 3
    http://blessingye.blogspot.com/2016/01/not-uncommon-for-marriages-to-fall.html?showComment=1453477863691#c8110257239802072076

    http://tayrayy.blogspot.com/2016/01/in-handmaids-tale-there-is-character.html?showComment=1453478412853#c1813948361560931502

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  34. http://babykayyyblog.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-brief-wondrous-life-of-oscar-wao-by.html#comment-form

    http://lauraalozzano.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-by-cormac-mc-carthy.html?showComment=1453478222990#c5103840349504967218

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  35. http://alsandriaj.blogspot.com/

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  36. J. Ihenwe
    3rd Period

    http://kaylavuong.blogspot.com/2016/01/scientifical-novel-frankenstein-author.html?showComment=1453477202900#c6293557600942015953

    http://eduardosalazar1234.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-by-carmac-mccarthy-is-book.html?showComment=1453478283326

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  37. Keeyon Brown 3rd period
    http://posting-apocalyptic.blogspot.com/2016/01/blog-assignment-
    2.html?showComment=1453478363933#c4247875154088486767
    http://joshuachiwuziefrankenstein.blogspot.com/2016/01/victor-frankenstein.html?showComment=1453478539008#c3341699747139129402

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  38. John Pham 2nd Period
    http://alinanguyenapenglishiv.blogspot.com/2016/01/assignment-2-frankenstein-by-mary.html
    http://veragamboa.blogspot.com/2016/01/oscar-de-leon-is-protagonist-in-story.html

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  39. N. Arreguin
    2nd period

    http://blessingye.blogspot.com/

    http://cassysprophecy.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-handmaids-tale.html

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  41. A.Rais 3rd Period
    http://dvohandmaidstale.blogspot.com
    http://adryanfonsecablog.blogspot.com

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  42. T.G 5th period
    http://alsandriaj.blogspot.com/
    http://mytearessay.blogspot.com/

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  43. K.Vuong
    5th period
    http://mroqueapenglsihiv.blogspot.com/2016/01/tearessay.html?showComment=1453486506930#c3744851269738060633

    http://eadorsey4sfrankenstein.blogspot.com/2016/01/tear-essay-1.html?showComment=1453486250829#c9189106147860022710

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  44. D.M 5th period
    http://eduardosalazar1234.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-by-carmac-mccarthy-is-book.html?showComment=1453486341557
    http://reviewyoureads.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-tear-essay-road-written.html?showComment=1453486568998#c1449434540302871509

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  45. M.R 5th period
    -http://brigittecoronado.blogspot.com/2015/12/brigitte-coronado-1142016-3-pd.html?showComment=1453486670098#c5658576983455222322
    -http://taiyaburks123.blogspot.com/2015/12/frankstein-assignment-2.html?showComment=1453486309276#c1791754566036974467

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  46. T.F 5th period
    http://sweetseme01.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-by-cormac-mccarthy.html#comment-form

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  47. J.A
    period 5
    http://itsbrianbuisblog.blogspot.com
    http://eduardosalazar1234.blogspot.com/

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  48. B. Yemi-Ese 5th period
    http://frankthemonster23.blogspot.com/2016/01/in-novel-frankenstein-by-mary-shelley.html?showComment=1453486409031#c2848724257267093406


    http://ihenwejoy.blogspot.com/2016/01/freedom-and-equa-are-signficant-in.html?showComment=1453486861662#c8216788053634942753

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  49. T.F 5th period
    http://mroqueapenglsihiv.blogspot.com/2016/01/tearessay.html?showComment=1453487074438#c1046846367543175690

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  50. J.M
    Period 5

    http://natheroad.blogspot.com/2016/01/mccarthys-fictional-novel-road-is.html#comment-form

    http://dantheman1217.blogspot.com/2016/01/mccarthys-novel-road-shows-aftermath-of.html#comment-form

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  51. L.Winger, Period 5

    http://mroqueapenglsihiv.blogspot.com/2016/01/tearessay.html?showComment=1453486712391#c6392565884154222483

    http://dvohandmaidstale.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-handmaids-tale-is-fictional-book.html?showComment=1453487058139#c214853658661351353

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  52. J.George
    Period 5

    http://frankthemonster23.blogspot.com/

    http://tomiosude.blogspot.com/

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  53. M. Gomez
    Period 5

    http://bwlow.blogspot.com/2016/01/brief-wondrous-life-of-oscar-wao-by.html?showComment=1453487343819#c5070502104663878106

    http://syedakhatija.blogspot.com/2016/01/syeda-khatija-period-3rd-january-15.html?showComment=1453486710101#c6404938050948734617

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  54. T.F 5th period
    http://flowenolcinur.blogspot.com/2016/01/cormac-mccarthys-post-apocalypse-novel.html?showComment=1453487428575#c3405752169090785490

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  57. A. Vuong, Period Three

    http://marianoshaven.blogspot.com/2016/01/tear.html?showComment=1453489511244#c4149876975794242103

    http://the1andonlyace.blogspot.com/2016/01/create-art-through-their-own-form-of.html#comment-form

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  58. A. Austin 3rd Period

    http://darnthatsdeep.blogspot.com/2016/01/being-stuck-in-place-deprived-of-any_15.html?showComment=1453492059595#c5568829755791049914


    http://dantheman1217.blogspot.com/2016/01/mccarthys-novel-road-shows-aftermath-of.html?showComment=1453492308454#c4376541082124019939

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  59. C. Castaneda
    7th period
    http://posting-apocalyptic.blogspot.com/2016/01/blog-assignment-2.html?showComment=1453493104790#c593261034519882020

    http://sweetseme01.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-by-cormac-mccarthy.html?showComment=1453493499138#c4394454062136886868

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  60. J.Chiwuzie
    7th period
    http://frankthemonster23.blogspot.com/2016/01/in-novel-frankenstein-by-mary-shelley.html?showComment=1453492928758#c3130669156440609433

    http://ashleychukwuemeka.blogspot.com/2016/01/junot-diaz-vibrant-novel-brief-wondrous.html?showComment=1453493663000#c1268397663409667972

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  61. V.M 7th period

    Tomi Osude
    http://tomiosude.blogspot.com/2016/01/mary-shelleys-tragic-fiction.html?showComment=1453493367910#c8003276602262032631

    Jasson Melgar
    http://darnthatsdeep.blogspot.com/2016/01/being-stuck-in-place-deprived-of-any_15.html?showComment=1453493591855#c3612091822774919589

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  62. M.P - 7th Period

    http://deartran.blogspot.com/2016/01/a-characters-demise-road-written-by.html?showComment=1453493466056#c6597316388380386830

    http://marinayellowsubmarine.blogspot.com/2016/01/tear-frankenstein.html?showComment=1453493792496#c7199425320832219576

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  63. A. Jones 7th period
    http://lukepogi.blogspot.com/2015/12/welcome-to-my-blog.html?showComment=1453493274517#c1160366367749016679

    http://alinanguyenapenglishiv.blogspot.com/2016/01/assignment-2-frankenstein-by-mary.html?showComment=1453494012691#c1482637858267924924

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  64. A Nguyen P3

    http://acamposapenglishiv.blogspot.com/2016/01/show-how-characters-demise-helps-to.html?showComment=1453508153786#c4979296801224010944

    http://fotmp.blogspot.com/2016/01/frankenstein-essay.html?showComment=1453508557562#c4152327069608089974

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  65. K. Jovellanos
    5th period

    http://syedakhatija.blogspot.com/2016/01/syeda-khatija-period-3rd-january-15.html?showComment=1453518640631#c6056988696198987405

    http://marisolvillalbap2theroad.blogspot.com/2016/01/tear-essay.html?showComment=1453519351712#c3391346349493264043

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  66. M. Villalba

    http://victorblogswith7thperiod.blogspot.com/2016/01/mccarthys-road-features-very-few-major.html?showComment=1453520328299#c3321289135267796114

    http://findingwilliee.blogspot.com/2016/01/boy-in-road-despite-being-on-verge-of.html?showComment=1453521402879

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  67. W. Yung
    5th Period
    http://joshuachiwuziefrankenstein.blogspot.com/2016/01/victor-frankenstein.html?showComment=1453586117086#c5220529884977780876

    http://veragamboa.blogspot.com/2016/01/oscar-de-leon-is-protagonist-in-story.html?showComment=1453585636094#c5233928266783638945

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  68. Syeda khatija
    3rd period

    http://acamposapenglishiv.blogspot.com
    http://lauraalozzano.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-by-cormac-mc-carthy.html?m=1

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  69. Syeda khatija
    3rd period

    http://acamposapenglishiv.blogspot.com
    http://lauraalozzano.blogspot.com/2016/01/the-road-by-cormac-mc-carthy.html?m=1

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